tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post8619568902484840729..comments2023-09-13T07:02:17.001-07:00Comments on Where the Story Comes First: Six Sentence Sunday ~ Wild West Weekend ~ 1.2 (#sixsunday @6_Sunday)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15072714362184530001noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-79853355300583548182011-10-31T12:11:46.768-07:002011-10-31T12:11:46.768-07:00Great sentences. I like that she dresses properly ...Great sentences. I like that she dresses properly even if she knows it won't last long.Jonna Raehttp://www.jonnaraeauthor.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-75119386437595328252011-10-30T16:44:55.938-07:002011-10-30T16:44:55.938-07:00Great use of her reflection. Well done!Great use of her reflection. Well done!Alixhttp://romancingalix.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-67901670059501556462011-10-30T15:35:05.242-07:002011-10-30T15:35:05.242-07:00Great six! I like the way you set the stage for he...Great six! I like the way you set the stage for heading out the doorTom K.http://dryadsgarden.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-6270454919231011022011-10-30T14:03:18.000-07:002011-10-30T14:03:18.000-07:00I love that she knows no matter how good she looks...I love that she knows no matter how good she looks Dak will like her better without all the trappings. Good sixJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-45007812110737876792011-10-30T13:29:26.976-07:002011-10-30T13:29:26.976-07:00"he'd most likely rather see her naked&qu..."he'd most likely rather see her naked" Haha. Great line. Great six, actually. :-)Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-70411863153517138812011-10-30T11:50:38.947-07:002011-10-30T11:50:38.947-07:00Oh, I really like that last line. Nice!Oh, I really like that last line. Nice!Carrie Ann Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07970393378674676451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-92036378015736419112011-10-30T11:24:14.702-07:002011-10-30T11:24:14.702-07:00Great six. Loved the tone!Great six. Loved the tone!S.Lirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17787307019842983456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-8960461745001009522011-10-30T10:44:34.861-07:002011-10-30T10:44:34.861-07:00Good description. Thanks for sharing!Good description. Thanks for sharing!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-82284619338701823092011-10-30T09:30:16.591-07:002011-10-30T09:30:16.591-07:00Like the way that last sentence amps up the situat...Like the way that last sentence amps up the situation and makes you want to know MORE. Great excerpt!Veronica Scotthttp://veronicascott.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-79094665417327503582011-10-30T08:34:25.595-07:002011-10-30T08:34:25.595-07:00So fast confidence rises and falls. Well done six,...So fast confidence rises and falls. Well done six, CR. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-22497976353338822932011-10-30T07:37:43.663-07:002011-10-30T07:37:43.663-07:00fantastic descriptions! well done!
LIzfantastic descriptions! well done!<br />LIzLizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15182147051413946727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-46254334566260781402011-10-30T06:47:13.845-07:002011-10-30T06:47:13.845-07:00Is this a fish out of water story? Love those!Is this a fish out of water story? Love those!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-84482776871546448922011-10-30T06:32:16.016-07:002011-10-30T06:32:16.016-07:00nice way to display how she's adjusting to lif...nice way to display how she's adjusting to life away from the limelight...sounds like she's doing just fine...and would maybe do better naked? LOL Excellent six xxJoAnne Kenrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15234275353277804224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-29095335505148167312011-10-30T05:41:18.824-07:002011-10-30T05:41:18.824-07:00I wonder what her life was like before the farm......I wonder what her life was like before the farm... Great six!Chrystalla Thomahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17334487899923017045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-8395526287453308142011-10-30T05:23:31.515-07:002011-10-30T05:23:31.515-07:00Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales...Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3837772818197250406.post-90734429435359890622011-10-30T05:18:48.290-07:002011-10-30T05:18:48.290-07:00I love the apprehension and the "rather see h...I love the apprehension and the "rather see her naked" line! Sensational six!Sandra Renee Pessohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12206247562167014745noreply@blogger.com