“And that has what to do with me?” she muttered around the food.
“I’ve decided to keep an eye on you. You’re sticking by my side as much as possible.” He crossed his arms and his legs, indicating he’d brook no argument on the matter. “Now that you’re here, it’s gonna take a will of God to make me let you go this time.”
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20 comments:
I'm loving this story, a great six and I enjoy your blog. You are doing a great job! well done.
Love this! Love his determination.
Bossy but protective. Nice combination!
Excellent six, I want to know more :-)
Someone is very determined. Love it!
Yum. Love a determined man. Great six!
Mmmm, macho alpha male. Made me all tingly! Great six, C.R.!
Thanks all for your lovely comments! Glad you're enjoying the story!
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C.
Lucky her! ;0)
He knows what he wants...that's for sure ;-) lovely six!
Great dialogue.
Huh, sounds like a challenge. Wonder if she's the type to put up her dukes. (Bet she is.)
Yep, he's determined, lol. Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for stopping by everyone! Yep, he's determined and knows what he wants & she's a tough gal ;)
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C.
This dialogue is great. I really pulls the reader in :)
Love this. I really love reading what you put out every week.
So demanding! Haha, great six. I love the characterization you were able to show in such few words!
Thanks Melynda, Carrie Ann & Ana! I really appreciate your comments!
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C.
He seems determined all right! Nice!
Yummy six!
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