Six Sentences from Tracked
They bought him. Paid for his time and attention. Things he could be bestowing on me. That is, if he knew how much I wanted his notice, needed him in my life.
But no. He has no clue.
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8 comments:
Ok I am intrigued...give me more! Loved these 6
Nikki
Short and sharp,I love it.
I'm feeling her longing need is going to be well unravelled when your finished with her. Great six!
Interesting, you've set things up so that the reader definitely wants to know more of the story. Nice job.
Aw, why do they never notice! Great snippet!
It's sad how they never notice. Great six!
Oh, I look forward to reading more of this, to see if he does notice. :)
oh..short n sharp indeedy -- i'm now wondering, paid for?! hmm intriguing xx nice six!
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