#2
of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Dirty Little Demons.'
She opened her mind and was met with intense longing. He did want her. No acne-prone kid, no awkward seduction, would be her fate. Her heart sang in happiness.
“I’m called Ace. Want to go backstage with me?”
She opened her mind and was met with intense longing. He did want her. No acne-prone kid, no awkward seduction, would be her fate. Her heart sang in happiness.
“I’m called Ace. Want to go backstage with me?”
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23 comments:
I want to go back stage too now! Great six.
Back stage? Yes please! LOL
Why do I get the feeling she's going to be seduced? Nice 6.
Cute. Great 6. :o)
Yep, I'll go! Great six!
Interesting six, thanks for sharing.
I liked the feel of this!
Why yes I would like to go back stage. Nice 6.
Love this title. Fun snippet!
Oooohhh Will she? nice!
Oooh, backstage. And just what will they do back there? Hmm?! LOL. Great six.
Intriguing, and will have to read more!
Hm... Acne or backstage? Decisions, decisions... LOL. Nice 6.
Enticing snippet. Makes me want to read more about the pending backstage visit. :)
Yes please! Nice 6!
Thanks everyone for stopping by and leaving your comments! I appreciate you taking the time and giving my 6 a read.
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C.R. Moss
I hope going backstage isn't a euphemism for something else. ;) Thanks for sharing!
Nice six! Your writing is concise and trimmed, which I love. You leave much to the reader's imagination, which is also great. I'd definitely read more--I'll be back next week!
Makes me want to read more. "heart sang" is a little cliché, but other than that nice job. Fave sentence: "No acne-prone kid, no awkward seduction, would be her fate." Does that not describe ALL of our first dating experiences?
Nope. Not a euphemism. He's in a show so they go off stage and then to a prop room. ;)
Thanks for the compliments!
Yeah, acne prone would describe the world of our youth. lol!
Nice! I bet she does!
Nice clean, spare language.
sounds interesting - since I have the time been visiting folks - will be back
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