#1 of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Chasing
Miss Kringle.'
“You’re the only one left,
Jack.”
Victor’s request had to be some kind
of joke. Yet the rigid set of his wide shoulders and straight face told me
otherwise. Disbelieving what I’d just heard, I continued to stare at my PI partner
and friend. What did Vic mean he wanted me to track down an elf? There were
serious cases to work on, like helping my buddies in Metro track down a couple
of high end thieves.
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9 comments:
Great introduction. I want more.
Such an intriguing premise! I'm going to look this one up!
Oh I love the tone of this. My wish list is so long it's going to trip me up soon. Great six.
The elven menace must be stopped! LOL Ooh, best part is I have the book that contains this short so I can keep reading.
Tracking down an elf? Oh my, this makes for something very, very interesting! Thanks for sharing your six. x
Interesting! Love the tone!
Great hook! Excellent teaser. Looking forward to more!
Cute! Chasing down elves! I like where this is going!
"What did Vic mean he wanted me to track down an elf?" At this point we are not in Kansas any more (at a minimum!) Nice transition from the ordinary to the uncanny, done with deadpan understatement.
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