Six Sentences from our WIP Wild West Hauntings
* Shocked at the eerily familiar vista of the ranch before her, Rachel Star slammed on the brakes of her economy rental car. The vehicle skidded then fishtailed. Rocks shot out from under the tires, pinging the undercarriage and flying off into the scraggy brush growing alongside the stone covered drive. A grayish brown dust cloud enveloped the automobile as she came to stop in the middle of the road. Shaking from the fleeting but chilling sensation of déjà vu, she turned on the heat and waited for the view to clear.
* Fine, gritty earth particles created an ugly sandy coat on the green car.
For more on book 1 in the series (Wild West Weekend) & upcoming information on book 2 (Wild West Hauntings) visit Double D Ranch Tales blog & for other Six Sentence participants visit www.sixsunday.com
7 comments:
Good thing it was a rental car. LOL Nice six! :)
Excellent six...love your descriptions!
Nice lot of action in this. Very good.
Great description here. Makes the reader "feel" what's going on in the car. Interesting six to read and I enjoyed.
And the Dougan gang are back again. Gotta love those cowboys and their women.
Oooh! A paranormal dust cloud, very intriguing. I wonder who's about to visit her. Love your six, Casey.
Great six, leaves you wanting to read more.
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