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04 November 2012

Six Sentence Sunday ~ Wild West Hauntings ( #sixsunday @6_Sunday @rmsotera ) ~ reprise

Six Sentences from Wild West Hauntings.

* Shocked at the eerily familiar vista of the ranch before her, Rachel Star slammed on the brakes of her economy rental car. The vehicle skidded then fishtailed. Rocks shot out from under the tires, pinging the undercarriage and flying off into the scraggy brush growing alongside the stone covered drive. A grayish brown dust cloud enveloped the automobile as she came to stop in the middle of the road. Shaking from the fleeting but chilling sensation of déjà vu, she turned on the heat and waited for the view to clear.
* Fine, gritty earth particles created an ugly sandy coat on the green car.

For more on book 1 in the series: Wild West Weekend & information on book 2: Wild West Hauntings visit Double D Ranch Tales blog & for other Six Sentence participants visit


Jessica Subject said...

Wow, great description! :)

Eleri Stone said...

Feel like I'm there.

gemma parkes said...

Wonderful imagery!

Anonymous said...

Great six! So easy to visualize exactly what is going on!!!

S E Gilchrist said...

Great descriptive sentences here plus I can feel her mounting tension. Sounds like a great story.