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30 January 2013

Hump Day H00k #HDH ~ week 1

Hi all! I'm new to the group and this is my first week sharing a paragraph of my work. :)
Today I'm giving you a peek into my newest release Lovers and the Fiend. It's the opening paragraphs to the story. Enjoy!

* I have your woman. A nice piece of ass she is, too. She tells me you’re not bad yourself. I would love for you to join us later. A car will be waiting for you outside your office at noon today where my assistant will fill you in on some details. If you know what’s good for you and your gal, you’ll take advantage of this invitation. See you soon. ~ Kol Ainmire
* Jack Vorst’s temper went full tilt within a second. His blood pounded hard through his head and body. He’d told Kristina to be careful when she went out on her cases, but it seemed she still had gotten herself in trouble. Not good.

Please don't forget to stop by and read the other authors participating in this week's HDH ~ http://humpdayhook.blogspot.co.uk

15 comments:

Adriana said...

Oh my - stopped me right in my tracks. Excellent!

Jessica Subject said...

An awesome hook! :-)

L VanHorn said...

This is very compelling! Makes me wonder what she does for a living, and more importantly, what she's gotten herself into. Nice hook!

Michelle Hoefle said...

Very intriguing...hooked me right off!

elingregory said...

Eek. Terrific hook!

Colette Saucier said...

"I have your woman." Great opening line! Hooked us right there.

Catherine Green said...

I'm hooked! Welcome to the game! ; )

Talullah Rose said...

Big hugs and welcome to you...

I like the erotica/mystery mix ..x

C.C. Williams said...

Well, now that's a hook! Great opening paragraph!

C. Moss said...

Thanks for stopping by everyone! Glad you liked the hook. :)
C.

Flossie Benton Rogers said...

The opening of the book certainly does hook the reader! Great job and congratulations on your release.

Jade Crystal said...

What a fantastic opener! Grabbed my attention right away. Great hook!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Trouble, eh? Well knowing you, she's just warming up! Welcome to HDH!

Jennifer Simpkins said...

Welcome to the group. And this is such a nice way to introduce yourself. I loved the hook, and can't wait for next weeks.

Ciaran Dwynvil said...

an intriguing hook heralding trouble. Well done!