Hi all! I'm new to the group and this is my first week sharing a paragraph of my work. :)
Today I'm giving you a peek into my newest release Lovers and the Fiend. It's the opening paragraphs to the story. Enjoy!
* I have your woman. A nice piece of ass she is, too. She tells me you’re not bad yourself. I would love for you to join us later. A car will be waiting for you outside your office at noon today where my assistant will fill you in on some details. If you know what’s good for you and your gal, you’ll take advantage of this invitation. See you soon. ~ Kol Ainmire
* Jack Vorst’s temper went full tilt within a second. His blood pounded hard through his head and body. He’d told Kristina to be careful when she went out on her cases, but it seemed she still had gotten herself in trouble. Not good.
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If you're looking for posts on this blog, I'm sorry to say as of October 2 there aren't anymore. Due to glitches in connectivity between blogger and other social media, I've had to move blogs. You can now find out about me, my books and other stuff, including lots of guest posts, at https://caseymscorner.wordpress.com Thanks!
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15 comments:
Oh my - stopped me right in my tracks. Excellent!
An awesome hook! :-)
This is very compelling! Makes me wonder what she does for a living, and more importantly, what she's gotten herself into. Nice hook!
Very intriguing...hooked me right off!
Eek. Terrific hook!
"I have your woman." Great opening line! Hooked us right there.
I'm hooked! Welcome to the game! ; )
Big hugs and welcome to you...
I like the erotica/mystery mix ..x
Well, now that's a hook! Great opening paragraph!
Thanks for stopping by everyone! Glad you liked the hook. :)
C.
The opening of the book certainly does hook the reader! Great job and congratulations on your release.
What a fantastic opener! Grabbed my attention right away. Great hook!
Trouble, eh? Well knowing you, she's just warming up! Welcome to HDH!
Welcome to the group. And this is such a nice way to introduce yourself. I loved the hook, and can't wait for next weeks.
an intriguing hook heralding trouble. Well done!
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