This week I'm sharing a part from Wild West Hauntings, the second book in the Double D Ranch Tales saga. RM and I have 2 novellas and a third novel length story in the works for this series. We're also planning a special intimate event at Hot Mojave Knights ~ A Romance Readers' Event in Las Vegas regarding our Wild West series of books! So come out, meet us, enjoy the weekend and find out what we have planned for the series. (A special BOGO promotion for HMK is in effect until April 11 so get a friend to come, too!) And if you follow this blog and the Double D Blog, keep an eye out for upcoming blog h0ps for prizes and an extra special HMK prize from me and RM Sotera. ;)
* Shocked at the eerily familiar vista of the ranch before her, Rachel Star slammed on the brakes of her economy rental car. The vehicle skidded, then fishtailed. Rocks shot out from under the tires, pinging the undercarriage and flying off into the scraggy brush growing alongside the stone covered drive. A grayish-brown dust cloud enveloped the automobile as it came to a stop in the middle of the road. Shaking from the fleeting but chilling sensation of déjà vu, she turned on the heat and waited for the view outside her windshield to clear.
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14 comments:
Oh, I wonder what's going to happen when the dust clears. Great hook! :)
What a great visual you painted!! I could see and hear it all. Love it...makes me wonder what's beyond that cloud of dust she kicked up.
Ooooh nicely hooked! What happens next?
Hmm, what could cause her to come to such an abrupt halt? I'm hooked and curious!
Great imagery, I was right there in the car with her! I wonder what she saw that was such a surprise?
Why was the ranch familiar? Great hook.
Ack! Hope she's okay!
Powerful deja vu moment, well done!
Sounds like a great read - well done!
Ooh, nice descriptive hook!
What a strong reaction. Makes me very curious about her past and why she reacted so strongly. Nice hook!
Well written and intriguing.
Love this series and things only get better from here! Great place to leave a reader hanging!
What great description! Can't wait to see what happens once the dust clears :)
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