#3 of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Wild West Weekend'
Sure
enough, Dak was there, casually leaning against a porch post but still exuding
profound confidence. She followed him to his truck, admiring the sway of his
ass in his tight jeans, his powerful physique.
Cassie couldn’t help but stare at
the clear cut lines of his profile as he drove them to the far reaches of the
property and recounted the history and geology of the area. His bearing
conveyed strength, deep seated self-possession. The set of his lips and chin,
the focus of his gaze, informed her he probably had a stubborn side to his nature.
Not caring about how the red rocks were formed, she listened with half an ear,
reveling in how he and her last boyfriend were different.
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11 comments:
love it when they finally figure out they are really the helpless ones.
Nice character building.
Terrific six with her inner thoughts. I look forward to more. Thanks.
Ooh he sounds HOT! I love it! Awesome six, C.R.! Happy Sunday! *Hugs*
Love the tone and inner thoughts. You are doing some great writing here!
I'm with her, not so much interested in the geology (you had me with the mental picture of the the tight jeans) but at least he's a guy with good conversation! Enjoyed the excerpt!
He's a hunk!
I like how you describe the character while dropping hints about the scenery! Cool!
Great developement. Thoroughly enjoyed your six!
But I want to know how they were formed! LOL Great six, CR. I'm looking forward to reading this. :)
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