#4 of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Wild West Weekend'
Her most recent ex was dark-haired,
dark-eyed. His beefy body had been created by years of construction work, his
skin permanently tanned due to the same. That guy had an intensity about him
when he drank, was known to blow a lid at the slightest provocation. Obsessive
and possessive, he didn’t like her going to the types of parties she did. Their
relationship had only lasted a couple of months.
Same as most of her relationships
come to think of it, she mused.
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11 comments:
He sounds like a bit of an arse.
Wonderful description.. I dislike him already ;)
Awesome 6. Very evocative.
well, at least she knows what she likes
Might be time for some self-evaluation, huh?
It's no wonder he's an ex. Nice six! :)
Nice six, and even though the description was of the ex, the last sentence makes it clear it's really *her* we're learning about. I want to know more about her, why her relationships aren't working out. Thank you for sharing!
I think she's due for a good guy by this point. Hope there's one in her future.
Sounds like she's better off without him. Well done!
Hope her Wild West Weekend ropes her a new kind of ride! Great six.
The lead is a good one - keep drawing us in, darlin' Great job!
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