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20 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday ~ Wild West Weekend ~ 4.2 ( @crmoss #sixsunday @6_Sunday )

#4 of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Wild West Weekend'

     Her most recent ex was dark-haired, dark-eyed. His beefy body had been created by years of construction work, his skin permanently tanned due to the same. That guy had an intensity about him when he drank, was known to blow a lid at the slightest provocation. Obsessive and possessive, he didn’t like her going to the types of parties she did. Their relationship had only lasted a couple of months.
     Same as most of her relationships come to think of it, she mused.

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11 comments:

Gayle Ramage said...

He sounds like a bit of an arse.

Alix said...

Wonderful description.. I dislike him already ;)

Rebecca Royce said...

Awesome 6. Very evocative.

Jayel Kaye said...

well, at least she knows what she likes

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Might be time for some self-evaluation, huh?

Jessica Subject said...

It's no wonder he's an ex. Nice six! :)

Guilie said...

Nice six, and even though the description was of the ex, the last sentence makes it clear it's really *her* we're learning about. I want to know more about her, why her relationships aren't working out. Thank you for sharing!

clairegillian.com said...

I think she's due for a good guy by this point. Hope there's one in her future.

Vivien Dean said...

Sounds like she's better off without him. Well done!

Gem Sivad said...

Hope her Wild West Weekend ropes her a new kind of ride! Great six.

Sterling Priest said...

The lead is a good one - keep drawing us in, darlin' Great job!