#5 of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Wild West Weekend'
Whereas Dak, with his lighter,
gold-streaked hair and commanding blue eyes, was her peer, a man of
understanding and compassion. She loved his toned leanness from years of hard
work, the way the lines crinkled around his eyes when he smiled. There was a
straightforward way about him that set her soul and demeanor at ease. Dakota
was a man prone to great kindness.
It would be so easy to settle down
and claim the ranch as her home. If he were to ask her to stay, she wouldn’t
hesitate to say yes this time.
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7 comments:
Great six.
Nice six. Stay this time...did she leave him before?
I don't think I'd hesitate either, Dakota sounds like quite a guy. Like the hint of the back story. Excellent excerpt!
Oh, I enjoyed this six! Definitely am hoping he asks her to stay. Your description was excellent.
Good description! Thanks for sharing. :)
I like him. I hope she says yes.
That was a lovely description of Dakota.
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