Coming soon (October 2012) to Evernight Publishing! Six Sentences from Wild West Hauntings
*Slow and steady she pressed on the accelerator and finished the drive to the parking area near the lodge. The large building had a stone façade that reminded her of the white and ivory, inlaid with gold and gray veins, Italian marble found in her grandmother’s New York City penthouse. Rachel shifted uneasily in her seat. She couldn’t put a finger on it, but something about the structure was off. The lodge seemed too large, appeared too new.
*There’s nothing wrong with it.
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4 comments:
Hmm, I wondering if she should trust her instincts. Great six! :)
Nice sense of foreboding here. Spooky.
Good six, full of description and hints at Rachel's character.
Intriguing snippet!
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