Attention!

Thanks for visiting!
* When you see the * in my posts that just indicates a new line/paragraph. :)
* To see a lot of fun information, scroll through the side bars and to the bottom of the blog.

06 November 2011

Six Sentence Sunday ~ Wild West Weekend ~ 2.2 ( @crmoss #sixsunday @6_Sunday )

#2 of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Wild West Weekend'

A faint memory of the first time she and Dakota were allowed to go to a movie by themselves swept through her mind. That afternoon she had felt lighthearted and excited about their date. The anticipation of being alone with a boy she liked, wondering if he’d hold her hand or give her a kiss, had been overwhelming. She felt the same way now. The pleasant sensations were a welcome delight. With a smile plastered on her face, she yanked open the door.

For more, on 'Wild West Weekend' – available at Evernight Publishing - visit: http://doubledranchtales.blogspot.com/ & for other Six Sentence participants visit: http://www.sixsunday.com/

17 comments:

Alix said...

I love the anticipation and comparison, well done!

Jessica Subject said...

Seems so sweet and innocent, but I have a feeling what's on the other side of the door is quite the opposite. Great six!

melyndaprice said...

You can feel her anticipation. Well done :)

Nina Pierce said...

Love the memory we can all relate to. Puts me right in the scene!

Stephanie Adkins said...

Hey C.R.! Love the six! It's great reading you, my friend! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!

KaceyHammell said...

such a gentleness about this six. I'm pulled in and want to know more. Nicely done.

Nichelle Gregory said...

I love the excitement and anticipation in this scene!

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Oh my sensations. I really like this.

Dakota Trace said...

Ah the memories of youth...sitting in a darkened theater and wondering if the boy next to me was going to try to steal a kiss. Great six this week! Brought back found memories.

Vivien Dean said...

I only hope those feelings will prevail. Thanks for sharing!

Siobhan Muir / Meg Palevich said...

I like the mixture of the past with the present. Nicely done six, CR. :)

veronicascott said...

Enjoyed this, a happy scene, although who knows what's coming next, so you want to keep reading! Great excerpt.

Ginger Simpson said...

Great sample. Made me remember when I felt that way. Can't wait for more.

Sondrae Bennett said...

Love that last sentence. Nice six! :)

E. Jamie said...

Lovely six!

christine warner said...

Loved the way this started, so sweet and hopeful...but very curious as to what will happen when she opens that door. Terrific six!

Ruth Madison said...

How sweet! It's always nice to have those fluttery feelings. I'm full of anticipation now.