#2 of Six Sentences over six weeks from 'Wild West Weekend'
A
faint memory of the first time she and Dakota were allowed to go to a movie by
themselves swept through her mind. That afternoon she had felt lighthearted and
excited about their date. The anticipation of being alone with a boy she
liked, wondering if he’d hold her hand or give her a kiss, had been
overwhelming. She felt the same way now. The pleasant sensations were a welcome
delight. With a smile plastered on her face, she yanked open the door.
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17 comments:
I love the anticipation and comparison, well done!
Seems so sweet and innocent, but I have a feeling what's on the other side of the door is quite the opposite. Great six!
You can feel her anticipation. Well done :)
Love the memory we can all relate to. Puts me right in the scene!
Hey C.R.! Love the six! It's great reading you, my friend! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!
such a gentleness about this six. I'm pulled in and want to know more. Nicely done.
I love the excitement and anticipation in this scene!
Oh my sensations. I really like this.
Ah the memories of youth...sitting in a darkened theater and wondering if the boy next to me was going to try to steal a kiss. Great six this week! Brought back found memories.
I only hope those feelings will prevail. Thanks for sharing!
I like the mixture of the past with the present. Nicely done six, CR. :)
Enjoyed this, a happy scene, although who knows what's coming next, so you want to keep reading! Great excerpt.
Great sample. Made me remember when I felt that way. Can't wait for more.
Love that last sentence. Nice six! :)
Lovely six!
Loved the way this started, so sweet and hopeful...but very curious as to what will happen when she opens that door. Terrific six!
How sweet! It's always nice to have those fluttery feelings. I'm full of anticipation now.
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